Homework.^^
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강사 첨삭
Hello Alice!
I appreciate you for doing your homework even though you\'re busy. Remember that if your subject is singular, you need to put an article before it. if it\'s plural then you add -s.
example: A tiger is scary
Tigers are scary.
Teacher Venus^^
Hi teacher, ^^
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Here is my homework. Wndnesday Homework.
>>>Here is my homework for Wednesday.
answer:
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Korea represintative animal is tiger. But tiger is die out.
>>>Korea\'s representative animals are tigers but they are becoming extinct.
I think Korea important animal is Jindo dog.
>>>I think Korea\'s important animals are Jindo dogs.
Jindo dog is inherent animal at Korea.
>>>Jindo dogs are inherent animals in Korea.
Jindo dog have a sense of loyality.
>>>Jindo dogs have a sense of loyalty.
This being so Jindo dog serve one\'s master well.
>>>This being so, Jindo dogs serve their master well.
Also, Jindo dog is very brave.
>>>Also, Jindo dogs are very brave.
Therefore Jindo dog is important animal at Korea.
>>>Therefore Jindo dogs are important animals in Korea.
Friday Homework.
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answer: Once in a while I want to spend most of time alone.
>>>answer: Once in a while I want to spend most of the time alone.
Also, once a while I want to spend most of time with friends.
>>>Also, I want to spend most of my time with friends.
Example, When i busy and tired want to alone.
>>>Example: When I\'m busy and tired, I want to be alone.
When I stuffy and have troble want to with friends.
>>>When I\'m stuffy and have trouble, I want to be with friends.
But I always want to be alone.
>>>However, I always want to be alone.
When I alone can be take a breake and working.
>>>When I\'m alone, I can take a break and work.
And usually I busy. so I want to take a breake.
>>>Also, I\'m usually busy so I want to take a break.
Have a good day.^^
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