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2014-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What is one thing that many people don't know about you? Wow! This question made me think alot. I thought about this slowly. Maybe most people have something that people don't know about themselve. I also have one thing thatother people don't know anot me. I think even my family does't know about me well. I am a very careful person. It is hard to challenge something new for me however many people know that I am an adventure person. It is because of my behaviors. Idon't want taht other people know about me weakness that is why I pretend to be very okay and sometimes I overact that I am so confident. This is so funny. Sometimes I am also confused which character is real me.^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon once again Ms. [이름]! ^^

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about our topic though it took you a long time to answer it.

But anyway, you are you and do not let other people change you just because they want you to be the person whom they want you  to be. Got it? haha

Do you know about Johari window?

It just says that a person has 4 sides of personality. One is the open are where you and other people know about yourself. Another side is hidden where other people do not know and are not aware about your personality. The third is the blind spot where people know about you but you are nto aware of. And the last one is the unknown where both you and other people do not know.

Well then, see you again tomorrow
Enjoy the rest of the day!

Take care too!


Always,

Kathrine ^^



What is one thing that many people don\'t know about you?


 Wow! This question made me think alot.

>>  correct! 
 I thought about this slowly.

>>  correct! 

>> or: I have thought about this for quite some time.

Maybe most people have something that people don\'t know about themselve.

>>  correct! (themselves)

 I also have one thing thatother people don\'t know anot me.

>> I also have something which other people do not know about me.

 I think even my family does\'t know about me well.

>>  I think that even my family does not know me well.
 I am a very careful person.

>>  correct!

 It is hard to challenge something new for me however many people know that I am an adventure person.

>>  It is hard challenge myself to do something new, however, many people know that I am an adventurous person.

 It is because of my behaviors.

>>  correct!

Idon\'t want taht other people know about me weakness that is why I pretend to be very okay and sometimes I overact that I am so confident. 

>>  I do not want other people to know my weakness that is why I pretend to be okay and sometimes I over react so that I would look confident.

This is so funny.

>>  correct! 

Sometimes I am also confused which character is real me.^^

>>  Sometimes, I am also confused with what character is the real me.

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