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A blessed day Jessie!
Thank you for your compliment! But I'm not sure that I can be an active listener when I meet a foreigner. While I'm talking with you, I feel easy because I have met you for a long time. I'm introversive, so I'm not sure that I can do well as always. Anyway, the important thing is that I have to try the best when I face.
Take care always and see u!
<Essay>
Yep, I agree. When we watch a hero, we're able to long for his behavior or values. And it makes people behave like a hero, this is how movies and TV can influence our living way.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I hope you could give more examples next time.
Anyway, you still did a good job.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
A blessed day Jessie!
>> Correct!
Thank you for your compliment!
>> Correct!
But I\'m not sure that I can be an active listener when I meet a foreigner.
>> Correct!
While I\'m talking with you, I feel easy because I have met you for a long time.
>> While I\'m talking with you, I feel at ease because I have met you for a long time.
I\'m introversive, so I\'m not sure that I can do well as always.
>> I\'m introvert, so I\'m not sure that I can do well as always.
Anyway, the important thing is that I have to try the best when I face.
>> Anyway, the important thing is that I have to try my best when I face a foreigner.
Take care always and see u!
>> Take care always and see you!
<Essay>
Yep, I agree.
>> Correct!
When we watch a hero, we\'re able to long for his behavior or values.
>> When we watch a hero, we long for his behavior or values.
And it makes people behave like a hero, this is how movies and TV can influence our living way.
>> And it makes people behave like a hero, this is how movies and TV influence our way of living.
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I hope you could give more examples next time.
Anyway, you still did a good job.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
A blessed day Jessie!
>> Correct!
Thank you for your compliment!
>> Correct!
But I\'m not sure that I can be an active listener when I meet a foreigner.
>> Correct!
While I\'m talking with you, I feel easy because I have met you for a long time.
>> While I\'m talking with you, I feel at ease because I have met you for a long time.
I\'m introversive, so I\'m not sure that I can do well as always.
>> I\'m introvert, so I\'m not sure that I can do well as always.
Anyway, the important thing is that I have to try the best when I face.
>> Anyway, the important thing is that I have to try my best when I face a foreigner.
Take care always and see u!
>> Take care always and see you!
<Essay>
Yep, I agree.
>> Correct!
When we watch a hero, we\'re able to long for his behavior or values.
>> When we watch a hero, we long for his behavior or values.
And it makes people behave like a hero, this is how movies and TV can influence our living way.
>> And it makes people behave like a hero, this is how movies and TV influence our way of living.
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