Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm the person who are in a hurry to go places and purpose. It's not a preference but a character. I usually go fast, and feel impatient. Sometimes, I really want to be slow as well, but it isn't easy to think like that.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Wednesday! ^^
I think there\'s nothing wrong with your character.
It is better to hurry than taking time.
I think you can enjoy your life more, because you can do more things.
Therefore, just stay like that.
Anyway, don\'t forget to check the corrections and suggestions I made for your writing improvement.
See you! ^^
Enjoy reading! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I\'m the person who are in a hurry to go places and purpose.
>> I\'m the person who is in a hurry to go to different places with distinct purposes. (PERSON is singular, so the verb should be singular, too.)
It\'s not a preference but a character.
>> CORRECT!
I usually go fast, and feel impatient.
>> I usually go fast and feel impatient. (There\'s no need to put a comma before AND. You are not connecting two complete thoughts.)
Sometimes, I really want to be slow as well, but it isn\'t easy to think like that.
>> CORRECT!
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