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2014-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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I'm the person who are in a hurry to go places and purpose. It's not a preference but a character. I usually go fast, and feel impatient. Sometimes, I really want to be slow as well, but it isn't easy to think like that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Wednesday! ^^   I think there\'s nothing wrong with your character. It is better to hurry than taking time. I think you can enjoy your life more, because you can do more things. Therefore, just stay like that.   Anyway, don\'t forget to check the corrections and suggestions I made for your writing improvement. See you! ^^ Enjoy reading! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     I\'m the person who are in a hurry to go places and purpose. >> I\'m the person who is in a hurry to go to different places with distinct purposes. (PERSON is singular, so the verb should be singular, too.) It\'s not a preference but a character. >> CORRECT! I usually go fast, and feel impatient. >> I usually go fast and feel impatient. (There\'s no need to put a comma before AND. You are not connecting two complete thoughts.) Sometimes, I really want to be slow as well, but it isn\'t easy to think like that. >> CORRECT!

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