Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
Yup, it's already Wednesday. These days, I feel that time goes by quiet fast. So I'm decided to sleep a little bit late but I always fail to stay awake. It's hard for me not to sleep on time.
Anyway, take care always.
<Essay>
Even the news that celebrities were arrested for drugs sometimes come out. It was quiet shock. So to prevent people from taking drugs, we should promote that drugs are very bad for us all.
강사 첨삭
A pleasant morning!
Thanks for writing a composition even if you are busy with your activities.
Anyway, I hope you\'ll sleep better tonight.^_^
Please go over the corrections. Take note of the word \"quite\".
It is different with \"quiet\".
Hope you won\'t repeat the same mistake.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there!
>> Correct!
Yup, it\'s already Wednesday.
>> Correct!
These days, I feel that time goes by quiet fast.
>> These days, I feel that time goes by quite fast.
So I\'m decided to sleep a little bit late but I always fail to stay awake.
>> So I decided to sleep a little bit later but I always fail to stay awake.
It\'s hard for me not to sleep on time.
>> Correct!
Anyway, take care always.
>> Correct!
<Essay>
Even the news that celebrities were arrested for drugs sometimes come out.
>> Even the news about celebrities who were arrested for drugs sometimes come out.
It was quiet shock.
>> It was quite a shock.
So to prevent people from taking drugs, we should promote that drugs are very bad for us all.
>> Correct!
Thanks for writing a composition even if you are busy with your activities.
Anyway, I hope you\'ll sleep better tonight.^_^
Please go over the corrections. Take note of the word \"quite\".
It is different with \"quiet\".
Hope you won\'t repeat the same mistake.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there!
>> Correct!
Yup, it\'s already Wednesday.
>> Correct!
These days, I feel that time goes by quiet fast.
>> These days, I feel that time goes by quite fast.
So I\'m decided to sleep a little bit late but I always fail to stay awake.
>> So I decided to sleep a little bit later but I always fail to stay awake.
It\'s hard for me not to sleep on time.
>> Correct!
Anyway, take care always.
>> Correct!
<Essay>
Even the news that celebrities were arrested for drugs sometimes come out.
>> Even the news about celebrities who were arrested for drugs sometimes come out.
It was quiet shock.
>> It was quite a shock.
So to prevent people from taking drugs, we should promote that drugs are very bad for us all.
>> Correct!
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