homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy day and good afternoon Ms. [이름]!!
Well, are you still having a good time? I hope so.
As they say, we are young at heart.
Becoming young does not depend on our age but on how we feel and how we think.
Isn\'t it? Of course yes. kkk
Anyway, thanks for you time today and I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow.
Take care and see you!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Some people say that youth is a state of mind, do you agree?
I would say I totally agree with this but I partly agree with this!
>> I would say that I partly agree and disagree with this.
Right! Youth is a state of mind.
>> correct!
There are some people who are still good looking on the street.
>> correct!
Even they are really fashionable.
>> They are even fashionable.
We can not guess how old they are.
>> correct!
When we ask them what is the secret to mke yourself young? Almost people say that youth is a state of mind.
>> When we ask them about their secret of looking younger, they would say that youth is a state of mind.
However we cannot deny to be geeting old.
>> However, we cannot deny that we are getting older.
Our body cannot be heathy for good.
>> correct!
>> or: Our body could not be healthy for a long time.
When I was 2os, I had over noghts sevraltimes and drank a lot but I managed all my schedules but now it is impossible to do that!
>> When I was in my 20s, I went out over the midnight several times and I drank a lot but I managed my schedules but now it is impossible to do that.
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