Homework!

Game isn't important for adults comparing with children. In childhood, children can play games for thier joyful life, and they can make a relationship through the games. However, there are plenty of important things for adults like study, work, love, frendship and family. To maintain a great daily life and make a satisfied future, adults have to be far from games. By the way, Teacher Paula! What is the great way to improve my vocabulary when I'm talking?

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Thursday! ^^   A positively challenging day to you! ^^   Let\'s talk about your composition first. Your composition is indeed good. You really explained the different status of adults and kids regarding games. You are correct! ^^ For children, playing games is a way for them to have joyful lives. For adults, it is not really considered since we are busy making our lives.   Anyway, there are some things we need to discuss about the structure of your composition. I think you still have confusion with the concept of plural and singular. When you have a singular subject, be sure that other nouns are also singular. It is the same with the plural subject. When you have a plural subject, be sure that other nouns are also plural. There\'s another thing. Check your sentences if they have complete ideas.   Now, about your concern over the best method to improve your vocabulary when you are talking, try the following: 1. Take note of the synonyms and antonyms of the words you are familiar with; and 2. Use those words often or write sentences using them.   Sorry, I can\'t really give you the best way to improve your vocabulary skill. I can just give some suggestions.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you later! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Game isn\'t important for adults comparing with children. >> CORRECT! In childhood, children can play games for thier joyful life, and they can make a relationship through the games. >> In childhood, children can play games for their joyful lives, and they can make a relationship through the games. >> OR: In childhood, children can play games to have their joyful lives, and they can make a relationship through the games. However, there are plenty of important things for adults like study, work, love, frendship and family. >> However, there are plenty of important things for adults to consider like studies, work, love friendship and family. To maintain a great daily life and make a satisfied future, adults have to be far from games.>> To maintain a great daily life and make a satisfying future, adults have to be far from games. >> OR: To maintain a great life daily and make a satisfying future, adults have to be far from games.By the way, Teacher Paula! What is the great way to improve my vocabulary when I\'m talking? >> By the way, Teacher Paula, what is the best way to improve my vocabulary when I\'m talking?