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Hello there!
You noticed me several mistakes to figure out how I used wrongly. But I have one question. I often use 'wanna' instead of 'want to'. I heard that 'wanna' can be used in dialogue and it is a short form of 'want to'. However you seem that you want to correct it. Is it wrong? If it is, I'll fix it.
Then be safe :D
<Essay>
That's not that bad idea, I think. It could be inefficient, however it doesn't mean that it's not going to work. So if we need to study even while we're working, we could do that. Of course boss might not like that.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
You are right. We can actually use wanna if we are speaking.
However, we are ask to refrain from using informal words when correcting your sentences.
So it\'s just for the evaluation. If you observe, a month ago, what I do is just to label it as informal.
But don\'t worry, it is correct.
Anyway, let\'s enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there!
>> Correct!
You noticed me several mistakes to figure out how I used wrongly.
>> Do you mean: You noticed several of my mistakes and you pointed out how I used it wrongly.
But I have one question.
>> Correct!
I often use \'wanna\' instead of \'want to\'.
>> Correct!
I heard that \'wanna\' can be used in dialogue and it is a short form of \'want to\'.
>> I heard that \'wanna\' can be used in a dialogue and it is the short form of \'want to\'.
However you seem that you want to correct it.
>> However it seems that you want to correct it.
Is it wrong?
>> Correct!
If it is, I\'ll fix it.
>> Correct!
Then be safe :D
>> Correct!
<Essay>
That\'s not that bad idea, I think.
>> That\'s not a bad idea, I think.
It could be inefficient, however it doesn\'t mean that it\'s not going to work.
>> Correct!
So if we need to study even while we\'re working, we could do that.
>> Correct!
Of course boss might not like that.
>> Of course our bosses might not like that.
You are right. We can actually use wanna if we are speaking.
However, we are ask to refrain from using informal words when correcting your sentences.
So it\'s just for the evaluation. If you observe, a month ago, what I do is just to label it as informal.
But don\'t worry, it is correct.
Anyway, let\'s enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there!
>> Correct!
You noticed me several mistakes to figure out how I used wrongly.
>> Do you mean: You noticed several of my mistakes and you pointed out how I used it wrongly.
But I have one question.
>> Correct!
I often use \'wanna\' instead of \'want to\'.
>> Correct!
I heard that \'wanna\' can be used in dialogue and it is a short form of \'want to\'.
>> I heard that \'wanna\' can be used in a dialogue and it is the short form of \'want to\'.
However you seem that you want to correct it.
>> However it seems that you want to correct it.
Is it wrong?
>> Correct!
If it is, I\'ll fix it.
>> Correct!
Then be safe :D
>> Correct!
<Essay>
That\'s not that bad idea, I think.
>> That\'s not a bad idea, I think.
It could be inefficient, however it doesn\'t mean that it\'s not going to work.
>> Correct!
So if we need to study even while we\'re working, we could do that.
>> Correct!
Of course boss might not like that.
>> Of course our bosses might not like that.
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