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Hello again Mr. [이름].
Well, as they say, we are young at heart.
Becoming young does not depend on our age but on how we feel and how we think.
Anyway, I have to go now. Thanks for sharing you thoughts though.
See you again tomorrow! Have a great day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I never agree with that.
>> correct!
>> or: I would never agree with that.
Of course, a lot of people is saying with that but if they grow older than now, they may know that the mind and the body are really so different.
>> Of course, a lot of people are saying that but if they grow older, they would know that the mind and the body are really so different.
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