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Hi, Jessie!
I saw your costume! You're really harmorized with your red shirt and horn. But there's so many brilliant rivals, so it was hard for me to choose one. haha
Then see u on Monday.
For an enjoyable weekend!
<Essay>
I would rather live in a small town. Because there's a lot of people in a road. To put simply, I don't like a crowded place. And a city is too noisy for lots of cars. So I would like to live in a small town. But, I wanna like in a big city too someday.
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Hi there [이름]!
Thanks you! ^_^
I am glad that you took part in voting for the best costume. ^_^
I hope you also voted for the best jack-o-lantern.
Anyway, see you tomorrow!
I hope you can wake up on time.
~T. Jessie~
Hi, Jessie!
>> Correct!
I saw your costume!
>> Correct!
You\'re really harmorized with your red shirt and horn.
>> You really harmonized with your red shirt and horn.
But there\'s so many brilliant rivals, so it was hard for me to choose one. haha
>> But there are so many brilliant rivals, so it was hard for me to choose one. haha
Then see u on Monday.
>> Then see you on Monday.
For an enjoyable weekend!
>> Do you mean: Have an enjoyable weekend!
<Essay>
I would rather live in a small town.
>> Correct!
Because there\'s a lot of people in a road.
>> Because there are a lot of people on a road.
To put simply, I don\'t like a crowded place.
>> To put it simply, I don\'t like crowded places.
And a city is too noisy for lots of cars.
>> And a city is too noisy because it has lots of cars.
So I would like to live in a small town.
>> Correct!
But, I wanna like in a big city too someday.
>> But, I wanna live in a big city too someday. (informal)
OR>> But, I want to live in a big city too someday.
Thanks you! ^_^
I am glad that you took part in voting for the best costume. ^_^
I hope you also voted for the best jack-o-lantern.
Anyway, see you tomorrow!
I hope you can wake up on time.
~T. Jessie~
Hi, Jessie!
>> Correct!
I saw your costume!
>> Correct!
You\'re really harmorized with your red shirt and horn.
>> You really harmonized with your red shirt and horn.
But there\'s so many brilliant rivals, so it was hard for me to choose one. haha
>> But there are so many brilliant rivals, so it was hard for me to choose one. haha
Then see u on Monday.
>> Then see you on Monday.
For an enjoyable weekend!
>> Do you mean: Have an enjoyable weekend!
<Essay>
I would rather live in a small town.
>> Correct!
Because there\'s a lot of people in a road.
>> Because there are a lot of people on a road.
To put simply, I don\'t like a crowded place.
>> To put it simply, I don\'t like crowded places.
And a city is too noisy for lots of cars.
>> And a city is too noisy because it has lots of cars.
So I would like to live in a small town.
>> Correct!
But, I wanna like in a big city too someday.
>> But, I wanna live in a big city too someday. (informal)
OR>> But, I want to live in a big city too someday.
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