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2014-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Do you agree with the idea that "Life is like a dream"? I agree with the line "Life is like a dream" When I was young, eldery people told me that time flies so fast and you would think that you would have a dream later. So They said do not waste of my time, do enjoy and do your best what you want. I didn't know what they were talking about at that time. However, I could totally understand what they were saying. This time what I am doing now would be a dream when I will think tomorrow! Sometimes life makes us hard or interesting. Later on, we would remember that time and that would be like a dream!

강사 첨삭

Great afternoon Ms. [이름]!

It is nice to hear your happy voice today.

Truly, I agree with what you have said that when we wake up tomorrow, it seems like what we did today is just a dream.

So we have to live the fullest, and every moment.

Anyway, thanks for your time today Ms. [이름] and I\'ll see you again tomorrow.

Take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Do you agree with the idea that \"Life is like a dream\"?

I agree with the line \"Life is like a dream\"

>>  correct!
 When I was young, eldery people told me that time flies so fast and you would think that you would have a dream later.

>>  correct! 

So They said do not waste of my time, do enjoy and do your best what you want.

>>  So they said not to waste my time, just enjoy, do the best and all the things that I want.

 I didn\'t know what they were talking about at that time.

>>  correct!
 However, I could totally understand what they were saying.

>>  correct! 

>> or; I just understood what they were saying now.
 This time what I am doing now would be a dream when I will think tomorrow!

>>  correct! 

>> or: This time would be like a dream as I am going to think about it tomorrow.
 Sometimes life makes us hard or interesting.

>>  correct! 

 Later on, we would remember that time and that would be like a dream!

>>  correct! 

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