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Great afternoon Ms. [이름]!
It is nice to hear your happy voice today.
Truly, I agree with what you have said that when we wake up tomorrow, it seems like what we did today is just a dream.
So we have to live the fullest, and every moment.
Anyway, thanks for your time today Ms. [이름] and I\'ll see you again tomorrow.
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Do you agree with the idea that \"Life is like a dream\"?
I agree with the line \"Life is like a dream\"
>> correct!
When I was young, eldery people told me that time flies so fast and you would think that you would have a dream later.
>> correct!
So They said do not waste of my time, do enjoy and do your best what you want.
>> So they said not to waste my time, just enjoy, do the best and all the things that I want.
I didn\'t know what they were talking about at that time.
>> correct!
However, I could totally understand what they were saying.
>> correct!
>> or; I just understood what they were saying now.
This time what I am doing now would be a dream when I will think tomorrow!
>> correct!
>> or: This time would be like a dream as I am going to think about it tomorrow.
Sometimes life makes us hard or interesting.
>> correct!
Later on, we would remember that time and that would be like a dream!
>> correct!
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