HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe an extinct animal in your country.
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To do this homework, I searched an extinct animal in Korea through the internet and I realized many animals than I thought are extinct because following animals can be seen easily in zoo.
Extinct animals in Korea are as following.
- Wolf, Leopard, Tiger, Fox, Brown bear, Asiatic black bear
And I think we, human should try to preserve remaining animals well not to be extinct anymore and to study how to preserve continuously.
강사 첨삭
It\'s a terrific T U E S D A Y!
Yes, another day passed by.
Hope you\'ll stay cheerful throughout the week dear.
You\'re right Mr. [이름].
We must preserve our resources like these endangered animals.
I hope you\'ll love animals more my dear!
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Myra
Describe an extinct animal in your country.
To do this homework, I searched an extinct animal in Korea through the internet and I realized many animals than I thought are extinct because following animals can be seen easily in zoo.
>>To do this homework, I searched an extinct animal in Korea through the internet and I realized many animals than I thought are extinct because the following animals can be seen easily in the zoo.
Extinct animals in Korea are as following.
- Wolf, Leopard, Tiger, Fox, Brown bear, Asiatic black bear
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> Extinct animals in Korea are as following:
- Wolf, Leopard, Tiger, Fox, Brown bear, and Asiatic black bear
And I think we, human should try to preserve remaining animals well not to be extinct anymore and to study how to preserve continuously.
>>And I think we, humans, should try to preserve our remaining animals well for them not to be extinct anymore and study how to preserve them continuously.
Yes, another day passed by.
Hope you\'ll stay cheerful throughout the week dear.
You\'re right Mr. [이름].
We must preserve our resources like these endangered animals.
I hope you\'ll love animals more my dear!
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Myra
Describe an extinct animal in your country.
To do this homework, I searched an extinct animal in Korea through the internet and I realized many animals than I thought are extinct because following animals can be seen easily in zoo.
>>To do this homework, I searched an extinct animal in Korea through the internet and I realized many animals than I thought are extinct because the following animals can be seen easily in the zoo.
Extinct animals in Korea are as following.
- Wolf, Leopard, Tiger, Fox, Brown bear, Asiatic black bear
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> Extinct animals in Korea are as following:
- Wolf, Leopard, Tiger, Fox, Brown bear, and Asiatic black bear
And I think we, human should try to preserve remaining animals well not to be extinct anymore and to study how to preserve continuously.
>>And I think we, humans, should try to preserve our remaining animals well for them not to be extinct anymore and study how to preserve them continuously.
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