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Is fashion important? I think fashion is important. Fashion is one way to express me. we express ourselves by clothes, shoes and accessories. When people first meet, the fashion is one way to judge the other. People can predict a person's peronality. Also, Fashion is important at the social point. There should be courtesy between persons. When you go to a funeral, you have to wear diffrent clothes from daily clothes. The clothes have a function that express a person's emotion at some situation. So, for these reasons fashion is important.

Hello [이름]! Long time no talk. Please go over my corrections for your practice. ~Kelly^^ Is fashion important?I think fashion is important. >> Correct. Fashion is one way to express me. >> Fashion is one way of expressing myself. we express ourselves by clothes, shoes and accessories. >> We can express ourselves by the way we dress up. When people first meet, the fashion is one way to judge the other. >> When people meet for the first time, they are being judged according to their appearance and fashion. People can predict a person\'s peronality. >> People can predict a person\'s peronality through their fashion. Also, Fashion is important at the social point. >> Also, fashion is important in social gatherings. There should be courtesy between persons. >> There should be courtesy between two people. When you go to a funeral, you have to wear diffrent clothes from daily clothes. >> When you go to a funeral, you have to wear clothes according to the occasion. The clothes have a function that express a person\'s emotion at some situation. >> There are different types of clothes for different occasions. So, for these reasons fashion is important. >> Correct.