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What is your greatest strength? How about your weakness? My greatest strength is that I am resposible for my work. I think having responsibility is very important at society. I try my best to do my responsibility and I do not give up. It is greatest streength that helps me to finish my work and don't harm the other person. so, many people who works with me likes me and encourge me eventhough I didn't do good job. However, I also have weakness. It is I get tired easyily. My physical strength is not good, so I have to get enough rest. Also, I slept a lot. so, my morning time easily gone away. I try to get up early and start a day eariler.

Hi, [이름]. Wow! Thank you for accomplishing your homework, this means a lot. Anyways, it was nice meeting you. I was sad yesterday because I wasn\'t able to meet you in our first day of class. I provided some corections. Please read and review the corrections, if you have time. Take are always! -T.Faye   What is your greatest strength? How about your weakness?>>CORRECT My greatest strength is that I am resposible for my work. >> My greatest strength is being responsible. >>OR: My greatest strength is that, I am a responsible person. I think having responsibility is very important at society. >> I think being responsible is a very important thing in the society. I try my best to do my responsibility and I do not give up. >> CORRECT: >>OR: I always try my best to accomplish my task and I never give up. It is greatest streength that helps me to finish my work and don\'t harm the other person. >> It is my greatest strength that helps me finished my work without harming anyone.  so, many people who works with me likes me and encourge me eventhough I didn\'t do good job.>> A lot of people who works with me encouraged me eventhough, I wasn\'t able to do good. However, I also have weakness. >> However, I also have a weakness,  It is I get tired easyily. >> I  easily get tired. My physical strength is not good, so I have to get enough rest. >> CORRECT: >>OR: My body cannot tolerate a lot of physical activities so, I have to get enough rest. Also, I slept a lot. so, my morning time easily gone away. >> Also, I oversleep, that\'s why I\'m not productive in the morning. I try to get up early and start a day eariler. >>OR: But now, I\'m trying to get used of waking up early and starting my day early.