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2014-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Erine^^ Monday are Tuesday class are so close.;; I am basy to do your homework.^^ But I am fun, So thank you. Because your homework widen my thought. I know today's talk shows. But I didn't know the style of show. I never have seen the show. But I think it is not good during broadcasting, they are arguing each other. Why people are watching this show? If I see the arguing scene directly, I might feel uncomfortable. And they need to respect each other most of all, the audience. I think the desireable interviewer is never make interviewee and audience anger. And Interviewer can drag their sympathy. Than, Interviewee can easily talk their story. At last, All of them feel pleasure on the show time.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!

I know you are very busy but I really appreciate your effort in doing your homework!^^

There might be some confusions after reading my corrections so you can feel free

to ask me during the class later or on Friday, or you can send me another message to clarify

some things.

See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Hi Erine^^

>>Hi, Erine.
Monday are Tuesday class are so close.;;

>> Monday and Tuesday are very close.

I am basy to do your homework.^^

>> I am so busy to do your homework.
But I am fun, So thank you. Because your homework widen my thought.
>> But I became happy , because your homework widened my thought, so, thank you.
I know today\'s talk shows. But I didn\'t know the style of show.

>> I know today\'s talk shows but didn\'t know the style of the show.
I never have seen the show.

>> I have never seen shows.

But I think it is not good during broadcasting, they are arguing each other.

>> I think it isn\'t good when they are arguing with each other while they are being broad casted.

Why people are watching this show?

>>Why do people watch this show?

If I see the arguing scene directly, I might feel uncomfortable.

>> Correct.

And they need to respect each other most of all, the audience.

>> And they need to show respect especially, they need to respect the audience.

I think the desireable interviewer is never make interviewee and audience anger.

>> I think, a desirable interviewer will never make the interviewee and the audience angry.

And Interviewer can drag their sympathy.

>> The interviewer can also drag their sympathy.

Than, Interviewee can easily talk their story.

>> Then, the interviewee can freely/easily/comfortably talk/share their stories.

At last, All of them feel pleasure on the show time.

>> Lastly, all of them will feel pleasure during the show/all of them will be pleased during the show.

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