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2014-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Albert Camus is a French writer and his masterpiece is ‘The Stranger’. All people say that Meursault, who is a heroine in this book, is acting wired. So, the title is the stranger. What is wired? What is different? He got a message from a nursing house where his mom is staying. And, he attended to his mom’s funeral. Certainly, the most people would be sad & sorrow for their loss. But, he never cried. So, other people blame him why he does not cry for his loss. But, he never feels sorry. On the other hand, he thinks why this guy is insulting me. I just met him here, and I do not know him and this guy is not authorized to rebuke me. I am annoyed cause of him. So, all people think he is a stranger, and he acts wired and different. Nobody can understand his behavior. He is just annoyed by a strong Sun. He feels that the strong ray just bothers me a lot. He does not care of mom’s funeral. He just wants all the funeral arrangement finished as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

The way you shared to me the story of the book make me think that the person is really strange and is acting weird and different.

It caught my curiosity though.

This book would be on my bucket list.

Thanks for sharing.


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Albert Camus is a French writer and his masterpiece is ‘The Stranger’.

>>  correct!
All people say that Meursault, who is a heroine in this book, is acting wired.

>>  All people say that Meursault, who is the heroine in this book, is acting wired.

So, the title is the stranger. What is wired? What is different? 

>>  correct! 
 He got a message from a nursing house where his mom is staying.

>>  correct!

 And, he attended to his mom’s funeral.

>>   And, he attended his mom’s funeral.

 Certainly, the most people would be sad & sorrow for their loss.

>>  Certainly, most people would be sad and feel sorrowful for their loss.
 But, he never cried.

>>  correct!

So, other people blame him why he does not cry for his loss.

>> correct!

>> or: So other people blamed him of not crying for his loss.

But, he never feels sorry.

>>  correct!

On the other hand, he thinks why this guy is insulting me.

>> On the other hand, he thinks, \" Why is this guy insulting me?\"

 I just met him here, and I do not know him and this guy is not authorized to rebuke me.

>>  correct!

I am annoyed cause of him.

>>  I am annoyed because of him.
 So, all people think he is a stranger, and he acts wired and different.

>>  So, all people think that he is a stranger, and he acts wired and different.

>> So all people were thinking that he is a stranger and that he is acting weird and different.

Nobody can understand his behavior. 

>>  correct!
 He is just annoyed by a strong Sun.

>>   He is just annoyed by the strong sun.

He feels that the strong ray just bothers me a lot.

>>  He feels that the strong rays of the sun bother him a lot.

 He does not care of mom’s funeral.

>>  He does not care about his mom\'s funeral.

He just wants all the funeral arrangement finished as soon as possible.

>>  He just wants all the funeral arrangements be finished soon.

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