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Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
Well, having this kind of ability would be fun.
And knowing what other people are thinking about us might be exciting and awakens our curiosity yet, if we would know everything, it seems like life is not interesting anymore.
Anyway, thanks for shari9ng your thoughts and your time for today.
Enjoy the rest of the day and take care too!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If it were possible to read minds, would you want to?
If I could read minds, that would be a awsome abillity to me.
>> If I could read minds, that would be an awsome abillity to me.
When I have relationships with others, interviews and so on, I could get what they wanted then I could react what exacetly they wanted.
>> correct!
>> or: When I have relationships with other people
Wow this is the wonderful abillity.
>> Wow this is a wonderful ability.
However, I have a worry.
>> However, I am worried about it too.
Maybe I guess I would act for the others because I already knew the minds then it would be hard to ignore those situations.
>> Maybe I guess I would act for the others because I already knew their thinking then it would be hard to ignore those situations.
Life is interesting because of unexpected future..hehe
>> Life is interesting because of unexpected events in the future. hehe
Somehow, if I could really have this abillity, why not..I definitely want to have it!
>> correct!
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