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Hello, this is [이름]. Actually it is my first time to write someting here.^^;
If I have a time and money, I want to make a time machine, if it is possible. Because sometimes I want to go bact to 10 years ago due to that times I'm a student, so I'm really happy even though I didn't have enough money. In these days, I think what is the happy? rich or something like that. I think happiness is freedom. Now, I have a job, and have enough money to live with my wife, but I don't have time to take a rest. So if can make a time machine, I will go back, and I feel freedom.
Thank you and have a nice day.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts [이름]!
I am glad that you did your homework.
Anyway, for now, this might not be possible but we don\'t know if it could be possible in the future.
Wwell, just enjoy your life.
Have a great day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello, this is [이름].
>> Correct!
Actually it is my first time to write someting here.^^;
>> Actually it is my first time to write something here.^^;
If I have a time and money, I want to make a time machine, if it is possible.
>> Correct!
Because sometimes I want to go bact to 10 years ago due to that times I\'m a student, so I\'m really happy even though I didn\'t have enough money.
>> Because sometimes I want to go back 10 years ago, when I was still a student. At that time, I was really happy even though I didn\'t have enough money.
In these days, I think what is the happy?
>> These days, I am thinking about what is happiness.
rich or something like that.
>> Do you mean: Is it being rich or something like that?
I think happiness is freedom.
>> Correct!
Now, I have a job, and have enough money to live with my wife, but I don\'t have time to take a rest.
>> Correct!
So if can make a time machine, I will go back, and I feel freedom.
>> So if I can make a time machine, I will go back and feel freedom.
Thank you and have a nice day.
>> Correct!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts [이름]!
I am glad that you did your homework.
Anyway, for now, this might not be possible but we don\'t know if it could be possible in the future.
Wwell, just enjoy your life.
Have a great day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello, this is [이름].
>> Correct!
Actually it is my first time to write someting here.^^;
>> Actually it is my first time to write something here.^^;
If I have a time and money, I want to make a time machine, if it is possible.
>> Correct!
Because sometimes I want to go bact to 10 years ago due to that times I\'m a student, so I\'m really happy even though I didn\'t have enough money.
>> Because sometimes I want to go back 10 years ago, when I was still a student. At that time, I was really happy even though I didn\'t have enough money.
In these days, I think what is the happy?
>> These days, I am thinking about what is happiness.
rich or something like that.
>> Do you mean: Is it being rich or something like that?
I think happiness is freedom.
>> Correct!
Now, I have a job, and have enough money to live with my wife, but I don\'t have time to take a rest.
>> Correct!
So if can make a time machine, I will go back, and I feel freedom.
>> So if I can make a time machine, I will go back and feel freedom.
Thank you and have a nice day.
>> Correct!
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