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What do you see around you today that you could appreciate of its artistic value? I would like tell you about my university library. That university is 7st floor and is very big. The wall is made by glass and look like a leaf when we look from sky. There are many space and the computer. The most place where I like is DVD room. We watch all of movies free. So I go to that room every week and enjoy movies. Because of library our university is more beautiful and modern.

Hi there [이름] !^^ It\'s nice to hear that you like art!^^ I would like to see that room you are describing but then again, you\'r favorite room is a DVD room? hahahahaha.. Very manly!^^ Have a great day smart guy!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I would like tell you about my university library. >> CORRECT OR> I would like to talk to you about the library in my University. That university is 7st floor and is very big. >>  That university has seven floors and is very big. The wall is made by glass and look like a leaf when we look from sky. >> The wall is made of glass and looks like a leaf when we look up to the sky. There are many space and the computer. >> There are many spaces and the computers. The most place where I like is DVD room. >> My favorite place is the DVD room.  We watch all of movies free. >> We watch all of the movies for free.  So I go to that room every week and enjoy movies. >> CORRECT OR> I visit that room every week to enjoy movies. Because of library our university is more beautiful and modern. >> Because of the library. our University is more beautiful and modern.