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2014-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I prefer to wear a school uniform. Because I don't want to consider what kind of clothes I wear today. And It can be reduced the cost to buy clothes. The person who have rich parent buy the expensive clothes. So the other student also want to buy same clothes. So It can be make burden for their parent. It is the reason of my opinion. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
Thanks for once again doing your homework.
I\'m looking forward to reading more of your compositions.
Anyway, let\'s enjoy this weekend [이름]!
~T. Jessie~
I prefer to wear a school uniform.
>> Correct!
Because I don\'t want to consider what kind of clothes I wear today.
>> Because I don\'t want to consider what kind of clothes should I wear today.
And It can be reduced the cost to buy clothes.
>> And it can reduce the cost for buying clothes.
The person who have rich parent buy the expensive clothes.
>> A person who has rich parents can buy expensive clothes.
So the other student also want to buy same clothes.
>> So the other students also want to buy the same clothes.
So It can be make burden for their parent.
>> So it can be a burden for their parents.
It is the reason of my opinion.
>> That is the reason of my opinion.
Thank you.
>> Correct!

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