homework
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If you could ask one person, dead or alive, one question, who would you ask and what would you ask?
I want to ask about the heaven to dead person, who is living at the heaven. If nobody is living in the heaven, that means there is no heaven, so my curiosity will get solved. If there is a person living in the heaven, I want to ask what is heaven like. How could you get there?. And If I go to the heaven, can I meet my freind? I am really qurious about the heaven life!
강사 첨삭
I\'m also curious about the heaven.
So, I watched a movie that made me more curious about heaven.
Maybe, you can watch the movie \"Heaven is for real\".
That movie inspires me a lot.
Take care. :)
-T. Faye
If you could ask one person, dead or alive, one question, who would you ask and what would you ask?>> CORRECTI want to ask about the heaven to dead person, who is living at the heaven.
>>I am going to ask things about heaven to a person who is already dead and who is now living, in heaven.
If nobody is living in the heaven, that means there is no heaven, so my curiosity will get solved.
>> If nobody is living in heaven, that means there\'s no heaven so, my curiosity will be solved.
If there is a person living in the heaven, I want to ask what is heaven like.
>> But, If there\'s a person living in heaven, I\'ll ask him/her about heaven.
How could you get there?.
>> I\'ll ask him, how is he/she able to get there?
And If I go to the heaven, can I meet my freind? I am really qurious about the heaven life!
>> And If I go to heaven, would I be able to meet my friend? I am really curious about the life in heaven.
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