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2014-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How can we teach our children good behavior? Are words or example more important? I think when we teach our children good behavior, the example is more important than words. If we says to children "You should be polite". And we never show what is polite behavior, then children will not know how to behave. So I think it is better showing how to be good, rather than keep saying the words. Childred will look your behavior and follow it eventhough you never says a word.

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Hi there [이름]! Thank you for sendng this in. Please review my correcitons. ~Kelly^^ How can we teach our children good behavior? Are words or example more important?I think when we teach our children good behavior, the example is more important than words. >> I think that in teaching our children good behavior, teaching by example is more important than words. If we says to children \"You should be polite\". And we never show what is polite behavior, then children will not know how to behave. >> If we say to children \"you should be polite\", but we never show them a polite behavior then those children will not learn how to behave properly. So I think it is better showing how to be good, rather than keep saying the words. >> So I think it is better to show them how to be a good person rather than just saying it. Childred will look your behavior and follow it eventhough you never says a word. >> Children will follow you even if you don\'t tell them what to do.

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