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2014-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi erine. Iwas OK your new version. We took present beautiful nature for free from our ancestor. We enjoy everything on the Earth. The resources which we are using are exhausted. we make a by products using the limited resources. What we pay for? We took good things and we leave bad things. It's not fare. That means we also have to leave our assets for our descendant.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework and expressing your ideas. I also appreciate that you liked my new version. I will give you other grammar homework when we meet again!^^ I am looking forward to meeting you tomorrow!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi erine. Iwas OK your new version. >> Hi, Erine! I feel OK with the new version.We took present beautiful nature for free from our ancestor. >> We had received beautiful nature for free from our ancestor in the present.We enjoy everything on the Earth. >> We can enjoy everything on Earth.The resources which we are using are exhausted. >> Correct.we make a by products using the limited resources. >> We produce goods/products using the limited resources we have.What we pay for? >> And what do we pay for?We took good things and we leave bad things. >> We take good things and leave bad ones. It\'s not fare. >> It\'s not fair. / It\'s unfair.That means we also have to leave our assets for our descendant. >> We should also have to leave our assets to our descendants.

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