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2014-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What was a difficult conversation you had to have in your life? How did it turn out? What made it hard? Explain. I was kind of a "yes" girl. I ccould not say "no" to others. When I had a new job, I needed to ask some conditions about my work but I could not ask them anything. I just said "Yes" what they asked me. It is not only this whenever people asked me a favor, I did what they asked me if I could do. So I tried to avoid the situations but it was hard to do it. My close friends told me that I should overcome this. I should remember that I don't need to make everybody happy. Now, I can say "no" when I don't like to do and I don't need to. However, it is still difficult to say the words that make others' feelings hurt.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

How are you doing this morning?

Anyway, it is not bad to say \"yes\" to people but of course you should also know when to say \"no\".

It is not easy to please everybody.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and I\'ll see you soon!
Take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


What was a difficult conversation you had to have in your life? How did it turn out? What made it hard? Explain.

I was kind of a \"yes\" girl.

>> I was a kind of a \"yes\" girl.

I ccould not say \"no\" to others.

>> correct!
 When I had a new job, I needed to ask some conditions about my work but I could not ask them anything.

>> correct!

I just said \"Yes\" what they asked me.

 >>  I just said \"yes\" when they ask me.

 It is not only this whenever people asked me a favor, I did what they asked me if I could do.
 
>> Not only this but when people ask me for a favor, I just do what they have  asked me to do.

So I tried to avoid the situations but it was hard to do it.
 
>>So I tried to avoid that kind of situation but it was hard for me to do it.

My close friends told me that I should overcome this.

>> correct!

I should remember that I don\'t need to make everybody happy. 

>> correct! 
 Now, I can say \"no\" when I don\'t like to do and I don\'t need to.

>>correct! 
 However, it is still difficult to say the words that make others\' feelings hurt.

>> However, it is still difficult to say that word which would make other feelings hurt.

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