homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks to you, TOM!
I really admire you for studying hard.
I know that there are times that you find your homework difficult.
But you don\'t give up! Keep it up!
I prefer Mango because it is health.
I never heard about something about Kakao. Please tell me in class.
I don\'t like candies because it makes me fat.
Have a great night. Please go over the corrections below.
Teacher Nina
The important thing is that we must survive and get the will of the being alive.
>> The important thing is that we must survive and have the will to be alive.
I will change the standard of the test when I will be the superintendent of education.
>> I will change the standard of the test when I will be the superintendent in the Department of Education.
It is the nost nacessery thing to survive.
>> It is the most necessary thing in order to survive. ( Please be careful with the spelling of the words. ^^)
Don\'t make extraagant life.
>> Don\'t live an extravagant life.
It was like a astonoshed mice.
>> Did you mean: The mice looked astonished.
The most odorous food is tha fifh from north europe.
>> The most odorous food is called \"Tha Fifh\" from North Europe.
Here are the question.
>> Here are my questions:
1.Which do you like,chocolates or mango?
>> Which one do you like chocolates or Mango?
>> OR: Which one do you like best chocolates or Mango?
2.If do you like mango,why do you like it?
>> If you like Mango, why do you like it?
3.Did you see what happen to pick the KaKao?
>> Did you mean: Did you see what happens when you pick Kakao?
4.Do you like the candys?
>> Do you like candies?
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