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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello there
You're right. I also feel that I'm not practicing listening these days. Listening is also very important to talk to someone, isn't it? If I'm quiet good at speaking but can't understand what people are talking, it's useless.
Take care!
<Essay>
I don't know about a film... sorry. Instead, what about a drama? I watched a British drama, Sherlock. You know Sherlock Holmes, aren't you? It's remade version of orginal film. I could see the British people life. They always drink tea especially when guests visit their home. The most interesting is that there's no a lot of buildings like Korea. It seems like that the past culture remains wholly. I wanna go there someday!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Absolutely! So I hope that you\'ll keep on improving your listening skill.
I actually know Sherlock Holmes. He is my uncle! ^_^ (I\'m just kidding! ahhaha)
I read a book about his cases. I hope you can also read it.
It is better than watching it. ^_^
Let\'s enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there
>> Hello there!
You\'re right.
>> Correct!
I also feel that I\'m not practicing listening these days.
>> Correct!
Listening is also very important to talk to someone, isn\'t it?
>> Listening is also very important when talking to someone, isn\'t it?
If I\'m quiet good at speaking but can\'t understand what people are talking, it\'s useless.
>> Correct!
Take care!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I don\'t know about a film... sorry.
>> Correct!
Instead, what about a drama?
>> Correct!
I watched a British drama, Sherlock.
>> I watched a British drama entitled \"Sherlock.\"
You know Sherlock Holmes, aren\'t you?
>> You know Sherlock Holmes, don\'t you?
It\'s remade version of orginal film.
>> It\'s a revised version of the original film.
I could see the British people life.
>> I could see the British people\'s lives.
They always drink tea especially when guests visit their home.
>> Correct!
The most interesting is that there\'s no a lot of buildings like Korea.
>> The most interesting is that there aren\'t a lot of buildings like Korea.
It seems like that the past culture remains wholly.
>> It seems like the past culture remains wholly.
OR>> It seems that the past culture remains wholly.
I wanna go there someday!
>> Correct! (informal)
>> I want to go there someday!
Absolutely! So I hope that you\'ll keep on improving your listening skill.
I actually know Sherlock Holmes. He is my uncle! ^_^ (I\'m just kidding! ahhaha)
I read a book about his cases. I hope you can also read it.
It is better than watching it. ^_^
Let\'s enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there
>> Hello there!
You\'re right.
>> Correct!
I also feel that I\'m not practicing listening these days.
>> Correct!
Listening is also very important to talk to someone, isn\'t it?
>> Listening is also very important when talking to someone, isn\'t it?
If I\'m quiet good at speaking but can\'t understand what people are talking, it\'s useless.
>> Correct!
Take care!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I don\'t know about a film... sorry.
>> Correct!
Instead, what about a drama?
>> Correct!
I watched a British drama, Sherlock.
>> I watched a British drama entitled \"Sherlock.\"
You know Sherlock Holmes, aren\'t you?
>> You know Sherlock Holmes, don\'t you?
It\'s remade version of orginal film.
>> It\'s a revised version of the original film.
I could see the British people life.
>> I could see the British people\'s lives.
They always drink tea especially when guests visit their home.
>> Correct!
The most interesting is that there\'s no a lot of buildings like Korea.
>> The most interesting is that there aren\'t a lot of buildings like Korea.
It seems like that the past culture remains wholly.
>> It seems like the past culture remains wholly.
OR>> It seems that the past culture remains wholly.
I wanna go there someday!
>> Correct! (informal)
>> I want to go there someday!
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