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How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people?
When I am happy, my action get louder. I speak with loud voice. I even dance with my friend. I feel like my body get lighter when I am happy.
I like being around happy people. I think if I am around with sad people, I get sad too. Also, it is hard to make sad people in good mood. I think it is really hard work. So I like being around happy people.
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How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people?When I am happy, my action get louder.
>> When I am happy, my action gets wilder.
I speak with loud voice.
>> I speak in a loud voice.
I even dance with my friend.
>> Correct.
I feel like my body get lighter when I am happy. >> I feel like my body gets lighter when I am happy. I like being around happy people.
>> Correct.
I think if I am around with sad people, I get sad too.
>> Correct.
Also, it is hard to make sad people in good mood.
>> Also, it is hard to make sad people become happy.
I think it is really hard work.
>> I think it is really a hard work.
So I like being around happy people.
>> Correct.
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