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2014-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people? When I am happy, my action get louder. I speak with loud voice. I even dance with my friend. I feel like my body get lighter when I am happy. I like being around happy people. I think if I am around with sad people, I get sad too. Also, it is hard to make sad people in good mood. I think it is really hard work. So I like being around happy people.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! WOW!!! It\'s a suprise to see your name in the composition board. Please review my corrections. ~Kelly^^ How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people?When I am happy, my action get louder. >> When I am happy, my action gets wilder. I speak with loud voice. >> I speak in a loud voice. I even dance with my friend. >> Correct. I feel like my body get lighter when I am happy. >> I feel like my body gets lighter when I am happy. I like being around happy people. >> Correct. I think if I am around with sad people, I get sad too. >> Correct.  Also, it is hard to make sad people in good mood. >>  Also, it is hard to make sad people become happy. I think it is really hard work. >> I think it is really a hard work. So I like being around happy people. >> Correct.

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