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2014-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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Would you rather be deaf or blind? Give your reasons. Answer in 5 sentences only. ----------------------------------------------------------- I would rather be deaf. Because I think blind is more inconvenient than deaf, especially blind is very hard to move by themselves. And I think the pleasure of seeing is bigger than the same of listening, in the meantime the fear of blind is bigger than the same of deaf. My conclusion is that being healthy is the best in our life.

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Let\'s be cheerful because it\'s WEDNESDAY! :D
Hello there my ever-animated student, Mr. [이름].

Is everything going smoothly at work?
Hope so :))

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T. Myra

Would you rather be deaf or blind?
Give your reasons. Answer in 5 sentences only.
I would rather be deaf.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I\'d rather be deaf than blind.
Because I think blind is more inconvenient than deaf, especially blind is very hard to move by themselves.
>>I think being blind is more inconvenient than being deaf because it is very hard to move if you\'re blind.
And I think the pleasure of seeing is bigger than the same of listening, in the meantime the fear of blind is bigger than the same of deaf.
>>And I think the pleasure of seeing is bigger than than that of listening. In the meantime, the fear of being blind is bigger than being deaf.
My conclusion is that being healthy is the best in our life.
>>CORRECT
OR>> To conclude, it\'s best to be healthy in life.

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