homework
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강사 첨삭
Good evening TOM!
Thank you for doing an essay instead.
But I checked your page and I saw your homework.
I think there were some problems awhile ago.
Try to check it again. But don\'t worry it is okay.
Please go over the corrections below.
I will ask you a lot of questions.
Teacher Nina
Teacher,you didn\'t send me a homework.
>> correct
There is no words and sentences.
>> correct
>> OR: The page is blank.
Hydrogen car is very good at saving nature.
>> correct
>> OR: Hydrogen car is very good at saving the environment.
When we burn it,there is only water and a little nitrogenous compound.
>> When we burn it, there is only water a little nitrogen compound.
But there is also problem.
>> But there are also some problems.
Hydrogen is incompleteness.
>> Did you mean: Hydrogen is incomplete. (What do you mean? Please share it in class ^^ )
It is easy to fire and explosion.
>> It easy to explode.
>> OR: It easily burns and explodes.
Scientist always study about it.
>> Scientist always studies about it.
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