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2014-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Teacher,you didn't send me a homework. There is no words and sentences. Hydrogen car is very good at saving nature. When we burn it,there is only water and a little nitrogenous compound. But there is also problem. Hydrogen is incompleteness. It is easy to fire and explosion. Scientist always study about it.

강사 첨삭

Good evening TOM!

Thank you for doing an essay instead.

But I checked your page and I saw your homework.

I think there were some problems awhile ago.

Try to check it again. But don\'t worry it is okay.

Please go over the corrections below.

I will ask you a lot of questions.
Teacher Nina


Teacher,you didn\'t send me a homework.

>> correct
There is no words and sentences.

>> correct

>> OR: The page is blank.


Hydrogen car is very good at saving nature.

>> correct

>> OR: Hydrogen car is very good at saving the environment.
When we burn it,there is only water and a little nitrogenous compound.

>> When we burn it, there is only water a little nitrogen compound.
But there is also problem.

>> But there are also some problems.
Hydrogen is incompleteness.

>> Did you mean: Hydrogen is incomplete. (What do you mean? Please share it in class ^^ )
It is easy to fire and explosion.

>> It easy to explode.

>> OR: It easily burns and explodes.
Scientist always study about it.

>> Scientist always studies about it.

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