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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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What is your opinion about the topic, "It's better to find information in a library than on the internet."? Often, I searched some information through on the internet. It was very easy and comfortable. It could save time. Sometimes, I could find wrong information on the internet. So I had to find exact information. It was very hard. In my opinion, when we use on the internet, we have to be careful of wrong information.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you so much for making your homework. I definitely agree with your opinion. You are right! There are some wrong information on the internet so we have to be careful. It is better to search information in the library.  Take care always, [이름]! ^^ See you! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris Often, I searched some information through on the internet. >> I often search some information on the internet.It was very easy and comfortable. >> It was very easy and convenient.It could save time. >> Correct Sometimes, I could find wrong information on the internet. >> CorrectSo I had to find exact information. It was very hard. >> So, I had to find the exact information. It was very hard.In my opinion, when we use on the internet, we have to be careful of wrong information. >> In my opinion, we have to be extra careful when we search for information because you might get the the wrong one.

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