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2014-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi. Erine Perhaps, This is your last homework that you give. I hope we meet again. Thank you for your kindness during the class. 1.I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes. 2. Tom played golf while Julie went shopping with her friends. 3. The family lived in Japan for three years. 4. Larry called his mother while Caroline was watching television. 5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days. 6. Yesterday we played tennis for 2 hours. 7. While the holidays we relax, go sightseeing and visit friends. 8. In Europe, meals are different. People stay at the table for a long time.

강사 첨삭

Good morning and happy Friday, [이름]!
It wouldn\'t be last homework!^^
I will still meet you today and for the rest of the days!^^ 
I am looking forward to meeting you again and have wonderful time during our class!^^
See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi. Erine 
>> Hi, Erine.
Perhaps, This is your last homework that you give.
>> Perhaps, this might be the last homework you can give.
I hope we meet again. 
>> Correct.
Thank you for your kindness during the class.
>> Correct.
1.I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes.
>> Correct.
2. Tom played golf while Julie went shopping with her friends.
>> Correct.
3. The family lived in Japan for three years.
>> Correct.
4. Larry called his mother while Caroline was watching television.
>> Correct.
5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days.
>> Correct.
6. Yesterday we played tennis for 2 hours.
>> Correct.
7. While the holidays we relax, go sightseeing and visit friends.
>>During the holidays we relax, go sightseeing and visit friends.
8. In Europe, meals are different. People stay at the table for a long time.
>> Correct.

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