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Do you think computers are bad for health?
Why or why not? Answer in 4 sentences only.
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Yes, I agree on that computers are bad for health completely.
First because computer monitor makes eyesight being falling.
Second because an electromagnetic wave have bad effects on our body.
Third because keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
강사 첨삭
Mr. [이름]!
HAPPY TUESDAY AND I\'M BACK!
I\'m terribly sorry for being absent last Friday and yesterday. TT
I am attending some important matters in Manila and I have to stay there for long.
I know you\'re upset, admit it!kkkkk~
Please accept my apology.. TT
Thank you very much for your kind consideration.
See you in class tomorrow!
Always caring,
Teacher Myra (^^>)
P. S Good job on your medical terms!
Do you think computers are bad for health?
Why or why not? Answer in 4 sentences only.
Yes, I agree on that computers are bad for health completely.
>>Yes, I agree that computers are bad for health completely.
First because computer monitor makes eyesight being falling.
>>First, the computer monitor makes the eyesight blurry.
OR>> First, the computer monitor makes our eyesight poor.
Second because an electromagnetic wave have bad effects on our body.
>>Second, the electromagnetic waves have bad effects on our body.
Third because keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
>>Third, the keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
HAPPY TUESDAY AND I\'M BACK!
I\'m terribly sorry for being absent last Friday and yesterday. TT
I am attending some important matters in Manila and I have to stay there for long.
I know you\'re upset, admit it!kkkkk~
Please accept my apology.. TT
Thank you very much for your kind consideration.
See you in class tomorrow!
Always caring,
Teacher Myra (^^>)
P. S Good job on your medical terms!
Do you think computers are bad for health?
Why or why not? Answer in 4 sentences only.
Yes, I agree on that computers are bad for health completely.
>>Yes, I agree that computers are bad for health completely.
First because computer monitor makes eyesight being falling.
>>First, the computer monitor makes the eyesight blurry.
OR>> First, the computer monitor makes our eyesight poor.
Second because an electromagnetic wave have bad effects on our body.
>>Second, the electromagnetic waves have bad effects on our body.
Third because keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
>>Third, the keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
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