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Good morning Ms. [이름]!
How are you doing today! It is a happy Friday?
Any plans for this weekend? Anyway, whatever plan it is, just have fun.
Well, I agree that both have good points and benefits to students who are going to take them.
Face-to-face class is really more emphatic than an online class.
But it is good that you are still having an online class with me too. ^^
See you later Ms. [이름]!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Is Online Learning as good as Face-to-Face Learning?
Yes, it is. Online and Face-to-Face learning Each has good benefits.
>> correct!
The best reason of having online classes is that we can have the classes anywhere as long as we have computers.
>> correct!
So students can save their time to move place to plcase.
>> So the students can save their time while moving from one place to another.
But There are also some good benefits with Face-to-Face learning.
>> But There are also some good benefits with Face-to-Face learning.
Eventhough the teacher and the nstudent will see each other, it is very differen to see face-to-face from seeing throuh the cam.
>> Even though the teacher and the student can see each other, it is very different from seeing each other fact-to-face and through the cam.
If we see Face-to-Face, students will be motivate more because of feelings.
>> If we see Face-to-Face, students will be motivated more because of feelings.
It is really hard to explain but thurogh my experience, I tried more when I saw the teacher Face-to-Face.
>> It is really hard to explain but through my experience, I tried more when I saw the teacher Face-to-Face.
I was more cared or loved something like this.
>> It seems like was being taken care and loved more.
However, they have good points.
>> correct!
If the learners will try hard, they can have a good results.
>> If the learners will try hard, they can have good results.
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