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2014-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Is Online Learning as good as Face-to-Face Learning? Yes, it is. Online and Face-to-Face learning Each has good benefits. The best reason of having online classes is that we can have the classes anywhere as long as we have computers. So students can save their time to move place to plcase. But There are also some good benefits with Face-to-Face learning. Eventhough the teacher and the nstudent will see each other, it is very differen to see face-to-face from seeing throuh the cam. If we see Face-to-Face, students will be motivate more because of feelings. It is really hard to explain but thurogh my experience, I tried more when I saw the teacher Face-to-Face. I was more cared or loved something like this. However, they have good points.If the learners will try hard, they can have a good results.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

How are you doing today! It is a happy Friday?
Any plans for this weekend? Anyway, whatever plan it is, just have fun.

Well, I agree that both have good points and benefits to students who are going to take them.

Face-to-face class is really more emphatic than an online class.
But it is good that you are still having an online class with me too. ^^

See you later Ms. [이름]!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Is Online Learning as good as Face-to-Face Learning?

Yes, it is. Online and Face-to-Face learning Each has good benefits.

>> correct!
 The best reason of having online classes is that we can have the classes anywhere 
as long as we have computers.

>> correct!

So students can save their time to move place to plcase.

>> So the students can save their time while moving from one place to another.
 But There are also some good benefits with Face-to-Face learning.

>>  But There are also some good benefits with Face-to-Face learning.

Eventhough the teacher and the nstudent will see each other, it is very differen to see face-to-face from seeing throuh the cam.

>> Even though the teacher and the student can see each other, it is very different from seeing each other fact-to-face and through the cam.

If we see Face-to-Face, students will be motivate more because of feelings.

>> If we see Face-to-Face, students will be motivated more because of feelings.

It is really hard to explain but thurogh my experience, I tried more when I saw the teacher Face-to-Face.

>> It is really hard to explain but through my experience, I tried more when I saw the teacher Face-to-Face.

I was more cared or loved something like this.

>> It seems like was being taken care and loved more.

However, they have good points.

>> correct!

If the learners will try hard, they can have a good results.

>> If the learners will try hard, they can have good results.

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