homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. Erine
I am very happy to meet you again.
I naver have thought the United States as a nation of 'couch potatoes.'
It's a very fun expression.
I sometimes long for the life of couch potatoes.
When I was a young, I was a couch potato.
But now I can't enjoy that kind of life.
I suggest the way to avoid laziness life.
Make a plan for your one day.
If you accomplish it among your plans. Check the circle.
In the early days, It's difficult to do perfectly. But do it continually. And then you have many circle in your note. At last you will be a diligent person than before.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for another inspiring essay!^^
I think I am going to follow and do your suggestion.
I think I am going to follow and do your suggestion.
Today, we will have a grammar type of homework!^^
See you then!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi. Erine>> Hi, Erine.
I am very happy to meet you again.
>> Correct.
I naver have thought the United States as a nation of \'couch potatoes.\'
I am very happy to meet you again.
>> Correct.
I naver have thought the United States as a nation of \'couch potatoes.\'
>> I have never thought the United States as a nation of \"couch potatoes\".
It\'s a very fun expression.
It\'s a very fun expression.
>> Correct.
I sometimes long for the life of couch potatoes.
I sometimes long for the life of couch potatoes.
>> I sometimes long for the life of being a couch potato.
When I was a young, I was a couch potato.
When I was a young, I was a couch potato.
>> Correct.
But now I can\'t enjoy that kind of life.
But now I can\'t enjoy that kind of life.
>> Correct.
I suggest the way to avoid laziness life.
I suggest the way to avoid laziness life.
>> I suggest to have that way to avoid a lazy life.
Make a plan for your one day.
Make a plan for your one day.
>> Make a plan for one day.
If you accomplish it among your plans. Check the circle.
If you accomplish it among your plans. Check the circle.
>> If you accomplish something among your plans, encircle it.
In the early days, It\'s difficult to do perfectly.
In the early days, It\'s difficult to do perfectly.
>> In the beginning, it would be difficult to do it perfectly.
But do it continually.
>> But you can do it continuously.
And then you have many circle in your note.
>> Then, you can have many circles on your note.
At last you will be a diligent person than before.
>> As a result, you will be a more diligent person than before.
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