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Do you think computers are bad for health?
Why or why not? Answer in 4 sentences only.
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Yes, I agree on that computers are bad for health completely.
First because computer monitor makes eyesight being falling.
Second because an electromagnetic wave have bad effects on our body.
Third because a keyboard and a mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
강사 첨삭
Mr. [이름]!
HAPPY TUESDAY AND I\'M BACK!
I\'m terribly sorry for being absent last Friday and yesterday. TT
I am attending some important matters in Manila and I have to stay there for long.
I know you\'re upset, admit it!kkkkk~
Please accept my apology.. TT
Thank you very much for your kind consideration.
See you in class tomorrow!
Always caring,
Teacher Myra (^^>)
P. S Good job on your medical terms!
Do you think computers are bad for health?
Why or why not? Answer in 4 sentences only.
Yes, I agree on that computers are bad for health completely.
>>Yes, I agree that computers are bad for health completely.
First because computer monitor makes eyesight being falling.
>>First, the computer monitor makes the eyesight blurry.
OR>> First, the computer monitor makes our eyesight poor.
Second because an electromagnetic wave have bad effects on our body.
>>Second, the electromagnetic waves have bad effects on our body.
Third because keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
>>Third, the keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
HAPPY TUESDAY AND I\'M BACK!
I\'m terribly sorry for being absent last Friday and yesterday. TT
I am attending some important matters in Manila and I have to stay there for long.
I know you\'re upset, admit it!kkkkk~
Please accept my apology.. TT
Thank you very much for your kind consideration.
See you in class tomorrow!
Always caring,
Teacher Myra (^^>)
P. S Good job on your medical terms!
Do you think computers are bad for health?
Why or why not? Answer in 4 sentences only.
Yes, I agree on that computers are bad for health completely.
>>Yes, I agree that computers are bad for health completely.
First because computer monitor makes eyesight being falling.
>>First, the computer monitor makes the eyesight blurry.
OR>> First, the computer monitor makes our eyesight poor.
Second because an electromagnetic wave have bad effects on our body.
>>Second, the electromagnetic waves have bad effects on our body.
Third because keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
>>Third, the keyboard and mouse can cause turtle neck and carpel tunnel syndrome.
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