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2014-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Three R' of invironment are reduce,reuse and recycle. The book is a knowledge box and the TV is the fooly box. Couple of days ago,the US airline was disappeare. There is law that we make the crime exposed. We must make the practical alternative to stop the eruption. The highest drop rollar coaster is a Giant drop. It is located in the Australia. It reeches to 120M and drop in just a 5~7 seconds. One tower and two rollar coasters(other is Tower of terror).It is killing two birds with one stone.

강사 첨삭

Great job with your sentences again today, Tom!

I am so happy that you are doing your best to compose credible sentences.

Keep it up! You also incorporate the words you learned from our book.

Yet, you have to be careful with your sentence pattern and the tenses of your verbs.

Don\'t forget the correct spelling of the words you use. ^^

Anyway, I am proud of you. Don\'t worry, I am here to guide you all the way.

Just keep on doing your best and let us work harder together.

Thanks for sharing about the Giant drop. I want to ride that. Hihihihi.

But of course, I am sure that I will be really scared. Sweet dreams. ^^

Teacher Nina


Three R\' of invironment are reduce,reuse and recycle.

>> There are three R of environment and the meanings are reduce, reuse and recycle.  ( spelling check: environment and proper spacing of words.)
The book is a knowledge box and the TV is the fooly box.

>> The book is a knowledge box and TV is fool box.
Couple of days ago,the US airline was disappeare.

>> A couple of days ago, the US airline disappeared.  ( spelling check: disappeared)
There is law that we make the crime exposed.

>> Did you mean: There is a law that we can expose the crime to the public.
We must make the practical alternative to stop the eruption.

>> We must make a practical alternative to stop the eruption. 

>> OR: We must come up with a practical alternative to stop the eruption. 


The highest drop rollar coaster is a Giant drop.

>> The highest drop roller coaster is called \"Giant Drop\". ( spelling check: roller ^^)
It is located in the Australia.

>> It is located in Australia.
It reeches to 120M and drop in just a 5~7 seconds.

>> It reaches 120 meters and drops in just five to seven seconds. ( spelling check: reaches ^^)
One tower and two rollar coasters(other is Tower of terror)

>> Did you mean: It is composed of one tower and two roller coasters. The other one is called \"Tower of Terror\". ( spelling check: roller ^^)

It is killing two birds with one stone.

>> Did you mean: It is hitting two birds with one stone.

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