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Good afternoon to you Ms. [이름]!
Well, eating etiquette of one\'s country really shows their culture. I agree with that.
And I have heard that in your country it is really quite strict.
But for me as a foreigner who plans to have a trip in your country, it is better that I have an idea about the eating etiquettes in your country so that it would not be rude to other people.
Thanks for your time today Ms. [이름]!
And have a great day ahead too!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How does the etiquette of eating together in your country differ from other countries?
Every contry has their own manner of eating.
>> Every country has their own manner when in comes to eating.
It shows their culture.
>> correct!
I will tell you about some our eating etiquette.
>> correct!
First, we use chopstics and spoon.
>> correct!
>> or: First, we are using chopsticks and spoon.
We should not use them at once.
>> correct!
Second, we shouldn\'t hold the rice or soup bowls.
>> correct!
Third, we don\'t talk or read books while eating.
>> correct!
There are some contries that they share their stories while eating but it is rude in Korea.
>> There are some countries where they share their stories while eating but it is rude in Korea.
However, recently it is changing alittle bit.
>> correct!
Fourth, we should finish our meal that is served.
>> Fourth, we should finish our meal which is served.
When we have left food, other people might think that the food is not delicious.
>> When we have a left over, other people might think that the food is not delicious.
But it is a manner to leave some food in other contries.
>> correct! (countries)
There are still other manners but I think these are commonly different manners from onther contries.
>> There are still other manners but I think these are commonly different manners from other countries.
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