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2014-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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How does the etiquette of eating together in your country differ from other countries? Every contry has their own manner of eating. It shows their culture. I will tell you about some our eating etiquette. First, we use chopstics and spoon. We should not use them at once. Second, we shouldn't hold the rice or soup bowls. Third, we don't talk or read books while eating. There are some contries that they share their stories while eating but it is rude in Korea. However, recently it is changing alittle bit. Fourth, we should finish our meal that is served. When we have left food, other people might think that the food is not delicious. But it is a manner to leave some food in other contries. There are still other manners but I think these are commonly different manners from onther contries.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon to you Ms. [이름]!

Well, eating etiquette of one\'s country really shows their culture. I agree with that.
And I have heard that in your country it is really quite strict.

But for me as a foreigner who plans to have a trip in your country, it is better that I have an idea about the eating etiquettes in your country so that it would not be rude to other people.

Thanks for your time today Ms. [이름]!
And have a great day ahead too!


Always,

Kathrine ^^



How does the etiquette of eating together in your country differ from other countries?

Every contry has their own manner of eating.

>> Every country has their own manner when in comes to eating.

 It shows their culture.

>> correct!
 I will tell you about some our eating etiquette.

>> correct! 
 First, we use chopstics and spoon.

>> correct!

>> or: First, we are using chopsticks and spoon.

We should not use them at once. 

>> correct!
Second, we shouldn\'t hold the rice or soup bowls.

>> correct! 
 Third, we don\'t talk or read books while eating.

>> correct! 

 There are some contries that they share their stories while eating but it is rude in Korea.

>> There are some countries where they share their stories while eating but it is rude in Korea.

However, recently it is changing alittle bit. 

>> correct!  
 Fourth, we should finish our meal that is served.

>>  Fourth, we should finish our meal which is served.

When we have left food, other people might think that the food is not delicious.

>> When we have a left over, other people might think that the food is not delicious.

But it is a manner to leave some food in other contries.

>> correct! (countries)
 There are still other manners but I think these are commonly different manners from onther contries.

>>  There are still other manners but I think these are commonly different manners from other countries.

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