homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi^^ Erine.
I hope to recover your tonsil condition.
Anyway, we have similar problems.
Let's take care of our health.
It is important for every people that has protection of private life.
That is the natural right as People.
But in some cases, There are exceptions.
Those apply to politicians. They work for public part in the nation.
They were asked for incorruptible life from the public.
It is inevitable that they open their life.
Because they work important things. we could believe them. They are our representatives. We adopt and stand them. They have to keep their duties.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!^^
Yes, I think we do have the same pain but different
cause and I hope we can manage to treat ourselves. kkk
Anyhow, please check the corrections I checked in your homework.
If you have questions, just feel free to ask me.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi^^ Erine.>> Correct.
I hope to recover your tonsil condition.
I hope to recover your tonsil condition.
>> I hope you can recover from your tonsillitis.
Anyway, we have similar problems.
Anyway, we have similar problems.
>>Correct.
Let\'s take care of our health.
Let\'s take care of our health.
>>Correct.
It is important for every people that has protection of private life.
It is important for every people that has protection of private life.
>> It is important for every person to have protection of their private lives.
That is the natural right as People.
That is the natural right as People.
>>That is a natural right of a person.
But in some cases, There are exceptions.
But in some cases, There are exceptions.
>>But is some cases, there are exceptions.
Those apply to politicians.
Those apply to politicians.
>>The exceptions are applied to the politicians.
They work for public part in the nation.
>>They work for the public part of the nation.
They were asked for incorruptible life from the public.
They were asked for incorruptible life from the public.
>>They are asked for an incorruptible life from the public.
It is inevitable that they open their life.
It is inevitable that they open their life.
>>Correct.
Because they work important things.
Because they work important things.
>> Because they work on important things.
we could believe them.
>> We should believe in them.
They are our representatives.
>>Correct.
We adopt and stand them.
>> We adopt and stand with them.
They have to keep their duties.
>> Correct.
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