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2014-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Actually, I don't know exactly the customs in the classrooms in the US. But I think there is more freely express themselves to each other. Generally students in Korea do not want to talk with each other to reach the anwser. But students in US prefer to discuss with each other to reach the anwser. So Korean is better to concentrate something, otherwise American is better to speak something to the other person. It is the different of each classrooms. Thank you.

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Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for still trying even if you don\'t know much about their customs.
Anyway, indeed, that is one of the differences.
Let\'s talk again tomorrow [이름]!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Actually, I don\'t know exactly the customs in the classrooms in the US.

>> Correct!
But I think there is more freely express themselves to each other.

>> But I think there is more freedom in expressing themselves.
OR>>
But I think there is more freedom in discussing things with each other.
Generally students in Korea do not want to talk with each other to reach the anwser.

>> Generally, students in Korea do not want to talk with each other to reach an answer.
But students in US prefer to discuss with each other to reach the anwser.

>> But students in the US prefer to discuss with each other to reach an  answer.
So Korean is better to concentrate something, otherwise American is better to speak something to the other person.

>> So Korean classroom setting is better to concentrate on something, otherwise American classroom is better to speak out something.
It is the different of each classrooms.
>> This is the difference between them.
Thank you.
>> Correct!

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