homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes while listening to music.
2. Tom played golf while Julie went shopping with her friends.
3. The family lived in Japan for three years.
4. Larry called his mother while Caroline was watching television.
5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!
You got you homework perfectly. And thank you for doing it.
I hope that you will enjoy your trip tomorrow and also your weekend.
Have fun, relax and enjoy!
Take care too!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
1. I have been waiting for the bus for 20 minutes while listening to music.
>> correct!
2. Tom played golf while Julie went shopping with her friends.
>> correct!
3. The family lived in Japan for three years.
>> correct!
4. Larry called his mother while Caroline was watching television.
>> correct!
5. My mother came to stay with us during the summer for 10 days.
>> correct!
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