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2014-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Hello T-Faye I like my eyes. I don't have confidence to myself. But I like my eyes. I heard from around that my eyes are beautiful. It's my pleasure that I can give pretty eyes to my daughter. Thank you.

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Good Morning, Mr. [이름]! Wow! You just accomplished your homework, thank you! Have a great weekend. I\'ll call you again on Tuesday. -T.Faye   Hello T-Faye>>  CORRECT:I like my eyes. >> CORRECT: >>OR: What I like about myself, is my eyes!I don\'t have confidence to myself. But I like my eyes.>> I don\'t have much confidence but, I love my eyes! I heard from around that my eyes are beautiful. >> A lot of people tell me that I have a beautiful eyes.It\'s my pleasure that I can give pretty eyes to my daughter.>> I\'m happy that my daughter inherited my beautiful eyes.Thank you. >> Correct 

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