homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello T-Faye
I like my eyes.
I don't have confidence to myself. But I like my eyes.
I heard from around that my eyes are beautiful.
It's my pleasure that I can give pretty eyes to my daughter.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Good Morning, Mr. [이름]!
Wow! You just accomplished your homework, thank you!
Have a great weekend.
I\'ll call you again on Tuesday.
-T.Faye
Hello T-Faye>> CORRECT:I like my eyes.
>> CORRECT:
>>OR: What I like about myself, is my eyes!I don\'t have confidence to myself. But I like my eyes.>> I don\'t have much confidence but, I love my eyes!
I heard from around that my eyes are beautiful.
>> A lot of people tell me that I have a beautiful eyes.It\'s my pleasure that I can give pretty eyes to my daughter.>> I\'m happy that my daughter inherited my beautiful eyes.Thank you.
>> Correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.