Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
Of course this is what I should do. I often have a difficulty explaining my opinion, so thank you for that you always try to understand my ideas. Thanks to you, I can talk comfortably whatever a topic is.
See you~
<Essay>
I don't like to watch Korean movies, but there's one thing that I think that this is really the best ever among the Korean movies I saw. This is "The Good, The Bad, The Weird". I hadn't ever imagined that Korean director could show the background of the West like wilderness. And wonderful actions. It was really exciting and amazing. I wanna watch it again later.
강사 첨삭
HI there [이름]!
Thanks for sharing this.
I want to look into that movie.
I\'ll try.
Because I know what kind of movies you like and you know that I don\'t like those kinds of movies, right? hahaha,.
Anyway, see you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there!
>> Correct!
Of course this is what I should do.
>> Correct!
I often have a difficulty explaining my opinion, so thank you for that you always try to understand my ideas.
>> I often have difficulty explaining my opinion, so thank you that you always try to understand my ideas.
OR>> I often have difficulty explaining my opinion, so thank you for always trying to understand my ideas.
Thanks to you, I can talk comfortably whatever a topic is.
>> Thanks to you, I can talk comfortably whatever the topic is.
See you~
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I don\'t like to watch Korean movies, but there\'s one thing that I think that this is really the best ever among the Korean movies I saw.
>> I don\'t like to watch Korean movies, but there\'s one movie that I think is really the best among the Korean movies I saw.
This is \"The Good, The Bad, The Weird\".
>> Correct!
I hadn\'t ever imagined that Korean director could show the background of the West like wilderness.
>> I had never imagined that Korean directors could show the background of a West like wilderness.
And wonderful actions.
>> Correct!
It was really exciting and amazing.
>> Correct!
I wanna watch it again later.
>> Correct!
OR>> I want to watch it again later.
Thanks for sharing this.
I want to look into that movie.
I\'ll try.
Because I know what kind of movies you like and you know that I don\'t like those kinds of movies, right? hahaha,.
Anyway, see you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there!
>> Correct!
Of course this is what I should do.
>> Correct!
I often have a difficulty explaining my opinion, so thank you for that you always try to understand my ideas.
>> I often have difficulty explaining my opinion, so thank you that you always try to understand my ideas.
OR>> I often have difficulty explaining my opinion, so thank you for always trying to understand my ideas.
Thanks to you, I can talk comfortably whatever a topic is.
>> Thanks to you, I can talk comfortably whatever the topic is.
See you~
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I don\'t like to watch Korean movies, but there\'s one thing that I think that this is really the best ever among the Korean movies I saw.
>> I don\'t like to watch Korean movies, but there\'s one movie that I think is really the best among the Korean movies I saw.
This is \"The Good, The Bad, The Weird\".
>> Correct!
I hadn\'t ever imagined that Korean director could show the background of the West like wilderness.
>> I had never imagined that Korean directors could show the background of a West like wilderness.
And wonderful actions.
>> Correct!
It was really exciting and amazing.
>> Correct!
I wanna watch it again later.
>> Correct!
OR>> I want to watch it again later.
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