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Great Monday morning to you Ms. [이름]!
How are you feeling today?
Well, I hope you had a good weekend.
I agree with what you have said. There are some things that only people can do.
And that is to see the emotions other people want to convey through their compositions.
And computers cannot do that since it is only a machine programmed to do specific things.
Anyway, may you have a great day today and I\'ll see you hours later!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How Would You Feel About a Computer Grading Your Essays?
It is hard to express how I feel in English.
>> correct!
>> or: I would be hard for me to express my feelings in English.
It would be meaningless for me.
>> correct!
There are many good reasons when the computer is grading my essays.
>> correct!
>> There are a lot of good reasons if the computer is going to grade my essays.
Maybe there aren\'t any mistakes and I don\'t have any feelings for the computers.
>> correct!
>> or: Maybe there would be no mistakes and I would not feel anything.
Whenever I need the results, the computer will give me the results.
>> correct!
>> or: Whenever I need the results, it would just give it to me.
I would just write and let it check.
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I wouldn\'t have any inspiration from that.
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But the computer can not read my ideas.
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it will just check my grammar.
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>> or: it will just check the grammar of my essay.
It is really important to know how the writers write the essays when we check the essays.
>> correct!
As I say before, there are things that only people can do.
>> As I said before, there are things that only people can do.
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