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2014-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I hope Jane will look at and correct it, long time no see !! Nice to see you again ! It was difficult to tell my feelings on the class. but I think you got what i meant to say. I'm really really glad to hear you again. my homework is about crazy adventure that I want to go. I haven't thought seriously about it yet, One day.. I want to go abroad, anywhere. I want to experience other country's traditions and look around attractions. I can't even have a conversation with people who are live there. I have a weapon, body language. Maybe I can.. I'm waiting for our next class. It has been for about 6 months.. but thanks to your guide I was not so nervous ^^..

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! I am so much honored to have you back in class. I hope that you will always feel free to express your thoughts. Please remember that I am always here to guide you, so just be confident and don\'t be afraid to make mistakes when speaking because you will learn from them. Take care always! T. JanE ^^ I hope Jane will look at and correct it,>> I hope that Jane will look at this and correct it.  Long time no see !! Nice to see you again !>> Correct It was difficult to tell my feelings on the class.>> It was difficult to express my feelings in the class.  but I think you got what i meant to say.>> Correct I\'m really really glad to hear you again.>> Correct my homework is about crazy adventure that I want to go.>> My homework is about a crazy adventure that I want to take.  I haven\'t thought seriously about it yet,>> Correct One day.. I want to go abroad, anywhere.>> Correct I want to experience other country\'s traditions and look around attractions.>> Correct I can\'t even have a conversation with people who are live there.>> I can\'t even have conversation with people who live there.  I have a weapon, body language. Maybe I can..>> I have a weapon, that is body language.  I\'m waiting for our next class.>> Correct It has been for about 6 months..>> It has been about six months...  but thanks to your guide I was not so nervous ^^.. >> Correct

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