homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I hope Jane will look at and correct it,
long time no see !! Nice to see you again !
It was difficult to tell my feelings on the class.
but I think you got what i meant to say.
I'm really really glad to hear you again.
my homework is about crazy adventure that I want to go.
I haven't thought seriously about it yet,
One day.. I want to go abroad, anywhere.
I want to experience other country's traditions and look around attractions.
I can't even have a conversation with people who are live there.
I have a weapon, body language. Maybe I can..
I'm waiting for our next class.
It has been for about 6 months..
but thanks to your guide I was not so nervous ^^..
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! I am so much honored to have you back in class. I hope that you will always feel free to express your thoughts. Please remember that I am always here to guide you, so just be confident and don\'t be afraid to make mistakes when speaking because you will learn from them. Take care always!
T. JanE ^^
I hope Jane will look at and correct it,>> I hope that Jane will look at this and correct it.
Long time no see !! Nice to see you again !>> Correct
It was difficult to tell my feelings on the class.>> It was difficult to express my feelings in the class.
but I think you got what i meant to say.>> Correct
I\'m really really glad to hear you again.>> Correct my homework is about crazy adventure that I want to go.>> My homework is about a crazy adventure that I want to take.
I haven\'t thought seriously about it yet,>> Correct
One day.. I want to go abroad, anywhere.>> Correct
I want to experience other country\'s traditions and look around attractions.>> Correct
I can\'t even have a conversation with people who are live there.>> I can\'t even have conversation with people who live there.
I have a weapon, body language. Maybe I can..>> I have a weapon, that is body language.
I\'m waiting for our next class.>> Correct It has been for about 6 months..>> It has been about six months...
but thanks to your guide I was not so nervous ^^..
>> Correct
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