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I think we should Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings. Because if we destroy them and replace them with morden buildings, our children can't feel the history. This feeling is similar like, just watch on TV and really you go to travel there.

Hello there [이름]! ^^ A good tip in writing is to proof read what you wrote or go over it again before submitting it. I\'m pretty sure you copy-pasted \"Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings\".   Your answer was well-thought-out however, try to add some supporting clauses to your main clause to improve its lucidity and comprehensibility. Another note, never start a sentence with \"because\" since that will create a sentence fragment.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     I think we should Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings.Because if we destroy them and replace them with morden buildings, our children can\'t feel the history. >> I think we should try to preserve its old, historic buildings because if we destroy these buildings with modern ones, our children would be unable to appreciate our history. >> OR: I think a city should try to preserve its old historic buildings because if we destroy these buildings with modern ones, our children would be unable to appreciate our history. This feeling is similar like, just watch on TV and really you go to travel there. >> This sentiment is common because when someone watches the television and sees historic buildings, one wants to travel there to have a feel of a culture\'s history.