homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I agreed that about ' Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school'
Because When you influence something, you must close that.
And students stay in classroom long~time.
That time is more longer than time when they're parents stay with.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I totally agree with your opinion here. ^^ Thank you for answering the homework topic. I did have trouble with \"When you influence something, you must close that.\" To express intimacy or closeness with a person, use the phrase \"be close with\".
Practice more, I know you can do it. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I agreed that about \' Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child\'s success in school\'Because When you influence something, you must close that.
>> I agree with the statement that classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child\'s success in school because to influence someone, you must be close with them. And students stay in classroom long~time.That time is more longer than time when they\'re parents stay with.
>> Furthermore, students stay in a classroom for extended periods of time and that is longer than the time they are with their parents.
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