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2014-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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If I were an employer, I must choose a people who have been experience of go out of business Modern many people think go bust is humiliating. But I think fail is very rarely exprience. Because I am a human and human must have mistake. And that mistake can influence the fail. Therefore I need to watcher of fail.

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Hi [이름]!^^ Thank you for your opinion about the matter. ^^ You have a good sense of business.  Keep writing to further progress in writing in English.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   If I were an employer, I must choose a people who have been experience of go out of business>> If I were an employer, I must choose people who have experience otherwise, I will go out of business.Modern many people think go bust is humiliating. >> Nowadays, many people think that it is humiliating if a business goes bust. But I think fail is very rarely exprience. >> However, I think that failing is a very rare experience. Because I am a human and human must have mistake. And that mistake can influence the fail. >>  Since I am human and humans do make mistakes, mistakes can influence how failures turn out.Therefore I need to watcher of fail. >> Therefore, I need to be vigilant about the mistakes and failures I make.

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