homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The homework, which is daily is necessary for students.
Individually, I did the daily home When I was young~^^
So thsy must(...) do their homework.
If they don't have a homework,they can't get used to study when thet are young.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You are doing well in our class but your writing needs further improvement. ^^ Compare and contrast between what you wrote and the corrections made.
See you in class!^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
The homework, which is daily is necessary for students.
>> Daily homework is necessay for students.Individually, I did the daily home When I was young~^^ So thsy must(...) do their homework.
>> When I was young, I did my homework daily so students must also do their homework.If they don\'t have a homework,they can\'t get used to study when thet are young.
>> If students don\'t have homework, they won\'t get used to studying while they are young.
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