Homework

2014-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

I will open the office for tax consulting service. Because I have prepared the certification of it and I have a lot of experience about this. So I can consult with it to the other person. It is my dream to get the certification and open the my own office. So in order to reach my dream, I really effort every day. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
I know that you can reach your dream.
I know that you really do your best in everything.
So just continue striving harder.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
I will open the office for tax consulting service.
>> I will open a tax consulatation office.
Because I have prepared the certification of it and I have a lot of experience about this.
>> Because I have prepared the certification for it and I have a lot of experiences about this.
So I can consult with it to the other person.
>> So another person can consult me about it.
It is my dream to get the certification and open the my own office.
>> It is my dream to get the certification and to open my own office.
So in order to reach my dream, I really effort every day.
>> So in order to reach my dream, I really have to exert effort every day.
Thank you.
>> Correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기