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Hi again! Jessie.
Really? Did I do well in speaking? Yeah~! Thank you. I couldn't realize if I was done well or not, anyway I'm really appreciative.
Fron now on, I'm planning to leave my dormitory for some reasons. First, I have to leave after the exams. And I'll live in an other place with my best friend not dormitory anymore if we're allowed. I hope both our parents will allow our plan.
How do you think? Does it work? Just cross your finger for my plan and the exams!
Then see u tommrow! :D
<Essay>
It's too hard question for me because I haven't though about that, businees. Um... a coffee shop? And what else? I can't choose one! :'( I need more time to think about that...
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
So we\'ve talked about this already.
I do hope that your parents will allow you to live in another place.
I think you have to explain to them why you want to leave the dormitory.
You have to give a very good reason to convince them.
Better think about that.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi again! Jessie.
>> Correct!
Really?
>> Correct!
Did I do well in speaking?
>> Correct!
Yeah~!
>> Correct!
Thank you.
>> Correct!
I couldn\'t realize if I was done well or not, anyway I\'m really appreciative.
>> I didn\'t know if I did well or not, anyway I\'m really appreciative.
Fron now on, I\'m planning to leave my dormitory for some reasons.
>> From now on, I\'m planning to leave my dormitory for some reasons.
First, I have to leave after the exams.
>> Correct!
And I\'ll live in an other place with my best friend not dormitory anymore if we\'re allowed.
>> And I\'ll live in another place with my best friend not in the dormitory anymore if we\'re allowed.
I hope both our parents will allow our plan.
>> Correct!
How do you think?
>> What do you think?
Does it work?
>> Will it work?
Just cross your finger for my plan and the exams!
>> Just cross your fingers for my plan and the exams!
Then see u tommrow! :D
>> Then see you tomorrow! :D
<Essay>
It\'s too hard question for me because I haven\'t though about that, businees.
>> It\'s a hard question for me because I haven\'t though about that, business.
Um... a coffee shop?
>> Correct!
And what else?
>> Correct!
I can\'t choose one! :\'(
>> Correct!
I need more time to think about that...
>> Correct!
So we\'ve talked about this already.
I do hope that your parents will allow you to live in another place.
I think you have to explain to them why you want to leave the dormitory.
You have to give a very good reason to convince them.
Better think about that.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hi again! Jessie.
>> Correct!
Really?
>> Correct!
Did I do well in speaking?
>> Correct!
Yeah~!
>> Correct!
Thank you.
>> Correct!
I couldn\'t realize if I was done well or not, anyway I\'m really appreciative.
>> I didn\'t know if I did well or not, anyway I\'m really appreciative.
Fron now on, I\'m planning to leave my dormitory for some reasons.
>> From now on, I\'m planning to leave my dormitory for some reasons.
First, I have to leave after the exams.
>> Correct!
And I\'ll live in an other place with my best friend not dormitory anymore if we\'re allowed.
>> And I\'ll live in another place with my best friend not in the dormitory anymore if we\'re allowed.
I hope both our parents will allow our plan.
>> Correct!
How do you think?
>> What do you think?
Does it work?
>> Will it work?
Just cross your finger for my plan and the exams!
>> Just cross your fingers for my plan and the exams!
Then see u tommrow! :D
>> Then see you tomorrow! :D
<Essay>
It\'s too hard question for me because I haven\'t though about that, businees.
>> It\'s a hard question for me because I haven\'t though about that, business.
Um... a coffee shop?
>> Correct!
And what else?
>> Correct!
I can\'t choose one! :\'(
>> Correct!
I need more time to think about that...
>> Correct!
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